Descriptive Writing

In Te Ngahere  (our class) we have been learning about te Ngahere (the bush).  We had to write a piece of descriptive writing called a moment in time. We had to describe a picture of te Ngahere. My writing is only a draft so I will blog post the final copy in the future. The thing I think I did well was putting all of the descriptive language in. The thing I could do better next time is finish it more quickly.


Here is my writing.

A moment in time.

Ferns waving in the wind, and an old Rimu tree taking its last breath. The wind echoing through the mountains. Fantails hoping to each tree branch like a frog trying to catch a fly. Kiwis clocking in their burrows waiting for the night sky to awaken.