Last Friday at Paihia School and Paihia beach we did a tryathlon.
First of all when we were getting ready Mrs Williams had a big talk with us. She told were the boundaries were and there will be marshals telling you where to go, she said were to put your stuff so we won't lose it.
Then we went down to the beach and swam until someone in the water tells us to turn. Then we hopped out of the water and ran like the flash back to the school.
Then we got back to the school and swiped a bike and rode it around the field 2 times. When I was riding my legs were burning like the sun, some people went around the field more than 2 times so they could get more and more muesli bars.
The best thing I did was the run.
When everyone finished the tryathlon we had to go onto the court for a prize. Everyone who participated in the tryathlon got a….Ice-cream.There was a Dory ice cream,a Paddle Pop what people didn't like it,and there was Magma.
In the end I felt fantastic.
The End By Liam.B
Great recount Liam. Don't forget though, that you need to explain what you were learning (to use more descriptive language in your writing), what you did well and what you could have done better(in your writing.)
ReplyDeleteHi whea becks.
DeleteI complicity forgot to do that.
I will fix it up in the future.
OK bye.
Hi LiamB I like your story because you describe your story.Bye
ReplyDeleteHi vinnie.
DeleteThank you I will look at your blog to day and maybe comment on it.
OK bye.