In Te mauga we have been learning to collaborate. collaborationist means that you have to help one and other. Our teacher found this game called brake out. Brake out is when you have 5 locks. and you have to unlock the locks by looking for clues around the room. First we did not sick seed, but second we did, and it said Ice-cream's. Miss Lindsay had ice creams for us.
Miss Lindsay is our principle. Me and my class did well because first we did not collaborate but we learnt our lessen and we did it in the end.
In writing we collaborate by working on the same google doc and giving feedback to one and other.
Also for our toku ako and your hand in sheet.
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Hi Liam B, I like the way you told us what collaborating is and I like how you explained it. I think the thing you could have done better was putting a capital letter in you title and at the end of your story it didn't have that much to do with the story. What did you get to do when we did break out bye Liam.
ReplyDeleteOh thank you Lilly I compliantly for got. thank you for telling me. OK bye
DeleteHi Liam I loved what you told me about collaborating.You should put some photos and video's of you doing it and I have one question can you put your toku ako in so I can what it's looks like.Bye
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Hi Rikesh.
DeleteThanks for commenting on my blog. In your comment you have some mistakes. instead of saying So I can see whats look like. Say so i can see what is looks like.
Also I will do what you said.
Bye.
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ReplyDeleteGreat blog post Liam! What an awesome description of collaboration. You have a couple of spelling mistakes (the title) Come and see me to help you out. Do you have any photos you could add to this blog to make it more interesting?
ReplyDeleteHi Liam. I really like your description about collaboration. I think you could have checked your spelling. Your title needs a capital letter and you have also spelt collaborations wrong. Remember it’s Mrs lindsay not Miss lindsay. Remember to say what you did well in, not just I did well. And don’t forget to check other comments . By Jamie
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