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Thursday, April 12, 2018

Metaphore Peom.

In Te Ngahere we have been learning how to use metaphors confidently. I know I already posted this but that one had mistakes in it and this, one is the improved one. The thing I enjoyed was making the poem. The thing I could do better is maybe to it quick because it took me about a week, and also make it unders better.




Liam is a ninja that hides in the dusk and only comes out in chaos.


Liam is a ninja star that is trapping intelligence in it.


Liam is a nuclear atomic bomb that exploded full of intellect.


Liam is a katana sword that is trapping internal knowledge and facts inside of it.

Liam is a grappling hook swinging through his learning.

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