goal setting work sheet

	Surface Features			Deeper Features
	Spelling	Punctuation	Sentence Structure	Vocabulary	Idea	Structure	Organisation
Where am I? copy and paste the definition from above	R4	R5	R3	R3	R3	R4	R
	I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules.	I use capital letters, and sentence endings correctly for most of my sentences and some other punctuation correctly.	I am beginning to write sentences of different lengths-simple, compound and complex sentences.	I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail. Noun / verbs / adjectives	I have many simple ideas on the topic with no detail.	I put my ideas in order or groups and am attempting paragraphs. I use clear pronouns.
How do I know? Give some examples from your writing of why you think you are in that box	I’m an r4 because I spelt Participated Fantastic. Tryathlon.	I think I am in R4 because most of the time put I put full stops commas brackets and ellipses.	I am an r3 because I am starting to use complex sentences.	I am an R3 because I only use some metaphors and similes.	I am an R3 because I put lots of ideas but they have no detail.	I am an R4 because I have lots of paragraphs.
What next? What are your next learning steps?	I will praties to get better and better.	I need to use more commas and exclamation marks.	My next step is to stop use lots of and, and use then afte	Use simerly's metaphors, descriptive words,add details.	My next step is to still have lost of ideas but more detail.	My next step is to use more sentences in my paragraphs.

I am going to focus on vocabulary and sentence structure.

Get Nz Writing

On friday our class did get nz writing.✍ We just had to do a test and it said what we could do this is my example, if you could wiggle your ears or not, and can you roll your tong, so you get the idea.After that it said whats the longest word you know.
mine was tekoutko.

The thing I did well was answering the qusetion's. the thing I could of done better was the longest word I know, and that was Checkout.
we had to get a post card each in the class and there were 25 of us, and there were 35 post card, so some people had to go twice. 
we had to right a poem on the back of the card, and mine was, Liam is a Toyota doing parkour.

Liam's Tryathlon

Last Friday at Paihia School and Paihia beach we did a tryathlon.

First of all when we were getting ready Mrs Williams had a big talk with us.  She told were the boundaries were and there will be marshals telling you where to go, she said were to put your stuff so we won't lose it.

Then we went down to the beach and swam until someone in the water tells us to turn. Then we hopped out of the water and ran like the flash back to the school.

Then we got back to the school and swiped a bike and rode it around the field 2 times.  When I was riding my legs were  burning like the sun, some people went around the field more than 2 times so they could get more and more muesli bars.

The best thing I did was the run. 

When everyone finished the tryathlon we had to go onto the court for a prize. Everyone who participated in the tryathlon got a….Ice-cream.There was a Dory ice cream,a Paddle Pop what people didn't like it,and there was Magma.

In the end I felt fantastic.

I think I clould of done better at the bike ride.
                         The End By Liam.B